I really enjoyed your PSA, especially the music. The colors make it really heavy on one side though and makes it difficult to pay attention to the text. I might suggest adding color to the other side and desaturating them a bit so that it's easier to pay attention to the text. Or maybe making the text a funky color too.
I agree with the comment about the colors on one side, maybe put some of the color on the other side and overlay the drawn animation on both sides? Otherwise, love the music and general message of the PSA.
This turned out well! I am kind of obsessed with your simple type solutions, instead of just simply fading in/out. They work really well, but maybe color would help the text a bit. Then they don't have to compete with those other elements as previously mentioned. Otherwise, looking good!
The music worked well and the effects on the outer lockers were interesting. One suggestion would be to have color on both sides or just in the locker to create balance.
I really enjoyed your PSA, especially the music. The colors make it really heavy on one side though and makes it difficult to pay attention to the text. I might suggest adding color to the other side and desaturating them a bit so that it's easier to pay attention to the text. Or maybe making the text a funky color too.
ReplyDeleteI agree with the comment about the colors on one side, maybe put some of the color on the other side and overlay the drawn animation on both sides? Otherwise, love the music and general message of the PSA.
ReplyDeleteThis turned out well! I am kind of obsessed with your simple type solutions, instead of just simply fading in/out. They work really well, but maybe color would help the text a bit. Then they don't have to compete with those other elements as previously mentioned. Otherwise, looking good!
ReplyDeleteI think the music really characterizes this PSA, and I like how the school name slides down from the top text. Also I second the color comments above.
ReplyDeleteThe music worked well and the effects on the outer lockers were interesting. One suggestion would be to have color on both sides or just in the locker to create balance.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the fun vibe for this type of message that you have chosen. The visuals are all nicely done.
ReplyDeleteAt first I wasn't sure about the music but once the other details came to it made it flow quite nicely.
ReplyDeleteI dig the retro music, i'd like to maybe see some effects inside the locker. I liked the idea you had about the changing contents.
ReplyDeleteI love the music and the old-school feel. I really enjoy the effect on the right side of the frame and would like to see more of that!
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